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Help Wanted -revised-!!!

Mon Aug 27, 2007, 11:05 PM
Well I've been working on a [cough] 'few' stories for a long time. And In all of them I have gotten a bit stuck, either run out of ideas, interest in most cases, and on a few, I just can't seem to get good enough feedback from my friends to keep going.

Since one of my biggest problems seems to be my lack of interest, I need readers and feedback. Whenever anyone take any interest in my writing it always inspires me to write more and can help to get me out of a slump...

So now I'm coming to you fellow Deviants.
:pride: = homosexual themes



Theses are the stories I've been working on...

---A Thief in the Garden [CH 3]
A story of a man who is transfered a thousand years into present time while being the center of his own funeral. The energy of the time warp brings his 'almost' back to life, where he must fight his way through this confusing new world while he tries to come to terms with what he is, and the disturbing realizations of how he died.
---E.M.A.E [CH 2]
After going through horrible torment and unbelievable cybernetic transformations. The E.M.A.E unit goes berserk and wreaks havoc to it's creator and prison planet. After escaping its captivity it goes on a vicious hunt to destroy the program that created it.
---League [CH 1] :pride:
At the beginning of a war a draft is sent out that one man from every family is to be drafted. Seen as the only expendable member a young boy is sent out, though enemy territory, to reply to his summons and report for duty. Unfortunately he never makes it when he is ambushed by enemy solders and saved by an odd man who served aboard an unheard of under aquatic vessel.
---Range [CH 2]:pride:
A cow boy story. It's been some time since he was run out of his home town, and now these two men are tired of running and ready to stand up to their foes and fight for freedom.
---Follower of Snows [CH 2]
During the rise of Demons and the beginning of the Demon wars a young human, after loosing everything he ever loved makes a strange discovery, that he himself has become a demon, not only that, but he seems to be of significant importance to the survival of all the races of the civil lands.
---Highwayman [CH 1]:pride:
After robbing a wealthy merchant and his family, this highway man is shocked to find the same wagon overturned and burned beyond recognition a month later on his travels. He finds a survivor hiding in the wreckage and save the young man, as well as biting off more than he can chew and getting stuck in the middle of a more gruesome plot.
---Under the Brim [CH 7]:pride:
Broken down on his way home from a business trip, this young man find a good friend and lives a short time in the simple country life away from the big city's. But theres a new haunt in the friendly town hes been lodging at, and when people start to turn up dead along with mysterious sighting of a man in a black coat and traveling hat, he makes a rather strange discovery.
---The Silver Dragon [CH 2]
Years after the demon wars and there hasn't been a demon sighted since. Now with the racism and genocide plaguing the country a you man, and one of the last of his kind, must reawaken the seven spirits, and bring back the demon hoards in order to once more save the Civil Lands.
---Post Sin [CH 2]:pride:
A boy cast off in the street is taken in by a strange man with a brilliant smile. One his new caretaker is called away on a strange erren the buy is left in the care of a strange high class orphanage where he is taught to hunt down and eliminate everything from poltergeist to necromancers. Life is going well until the strange appearance of a near death vampire on the front steps of the orphanage. He cant help but assist the pitiful beast who seems to hold a great secret.
---Original Sin [CH 3]:pride:
[Unfortunately this is a comic and is harder to send out to people, so its only int his list as a placeholder for ' Post Sin ' if I have time, and this is all your interested in, I may we willing to send it.]After his sister death Rith has been in a state of constant depression. An the appearance of a rather familiar character could only bring something terribly good, or wonderfully evil. But what does he want with poor Rith?
---Purgatory [CH 8]:pride:
After sentenced to a life sentence for an unimaginable crime, two young men are taken to a prison planet to life out there days. But after their futile attempt at escape they face a new foe. A creature the likes of they have never imagines, so big it blocks out the wind and the sun, and its jaws are falling right fore them.
---Sons of the Wolf and Moon [2 Stories Completed]:pride:
A bunch of short stories based off Daland legends and the history of the Civil lands.
Finished so far are
"The Tree that Loved a Man"
"The Last Wish"




If you are interested just send me a note that contains the following information.
  1. -What stories you are interested in reading.

  2. -How do you want me to send them to you.


If you would like me to send through IM than send me your screen name.
I use AIM and MSN
But in case your one of those people that is never online at the same time as me, ten you can give me your e-mail and I can get a hold of you that way.
Also, give me your e-mail if that is just how you would prefer to be sent the stories.

Current Readers
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I'd love to help~
I've got a handful of stories too, so I know how much feedback means.
really? thats awsome ^^
send me a note with what stories you would be interested in looking at, and weather you want me to e-mail them, or send them through IM...
so eather give me your email, or list your IM

I use AIM and MSN, though I prefer AIM, and hopefully we can both get on around the same time ^^

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-----Your Conseince-----
Valicetra

"Say is that a tentacle?" :confused:
Alright I'll send you a note~
Hello there!:wave:
If it is feedback you need for insparation, I'd love to help. Reeding is my hobby (I'm known as a bookworm since I learned to reed).
If you are willing to share, I will be more then happy to reed and give my opinion about any issue of your stories.
P.S. I loved your story about the tree that loved a man!:love:

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